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You know that awful feeling when you just can't affect something. When the only thing that's left is to do whatever you're told to, no matter how much you don't want to do it?
That hopeless feeling…
That sadness…
No power, no control.
You have to obey.
Your wish to do otherwise is in no one's interest-
    we won't help;
    we can't help.


Excuses.
Everything happens so fast.
You're just watching, observing-
-people running, doing what they do best; no one looking at you and your needs.
You're selfish. –they say.
Yes I am.
    I'm sorry for being in love and not wanting to leave their side.                I'm sorry for caring about my sick grandmother and staying by her side.               I'm sorry for not being able to watch my parents fight.              I'm sorry for wishing to leave the ones who molest me.

I won't be selfish. Not anymore. I'll just sit here, cry and think about how life would be if I were somewhere else.
This wasn't supposed to turn out this way.. but, well, somehow it did...
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OreoLexii Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:( can relate to almost all of this.
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KaylaNight Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
N'aww :(
hope it'll get better:)
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hipknowtizer87 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
Sometimes it's okay to be selfish. You have to be to get anywhere in life.
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KaylaNight Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah i know.. but it's not like anyone ever listens to me...
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theShadowGrove Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hope ur grandma gets better. and if u need to talk, u know i'm always here for u :)
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KaylaNight Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know..thanks(:
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shadowsmokeandfire Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this poem. I agree with XxNERUxLENxX, and it seems like you really poured your soul into this poem. Awesome job.
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KaylaNight Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank u(:
I always write down my emotion.. writing is venting to me.
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shadowsmokeandfire Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No prob! And thanks for the llama badge!
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XxNERUxLENxX Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is the writing that people should read. Not some crap about ponies and rainbows. If people read the truth, then maybe this world would be a little less stupid.

I especially like the fact you wrote with emotion... Very nice job.
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